There are many things too be thankful for and my family is one of them. My mom is someone who has always comforting. My dad will be there to encourage me. I’m thankful for my two younger siblings, for keeping me company, when I’m lonely. I am thankful for these people who have supported me.
Hadia Malik
1 comment:
hadia, you did a wonderful job on this! i liked the part when you said your two younger sibling gave you company when you were lonely. the only thing you couldve done to improve it is instead of saying my mom, my dad you coulve used different words to start the sentence like you did with your siblings. again this was a great post!
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