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Thursday, March 31, 2011

UNIFORMS ESSAY

          Dear Richard O’Malley,

       Being free is just as vital as being diverse. According to Supreme Court Justice, Charles Evans Hughes, “When we lose the right to be different, we lose the privilege to be free.” The certainty of this statement is repeated in the current proposal recommended to the School Board of Education, to issue school uniforms for students in grade Kindergarten to 12th grade, and if approved, making the intellectual performances increase throughout the school year. This decision involving compulsory uniforms would not be a thought through conclusion and by far has several shortcomings. It is in the benefit of the Board of Education not to issue uniforms due to their price, decline on distinctiveness and the lack of evidence to progress academic scores.
        Setting a uniform policy, will result in having households to compensate for costly uniforms. Although parents will only need to acquire two or three sets of uniforms, this will be adequate for one student and will take the attention of one’s clothing and instead will turn the focus to their studies and academics. However, in addition to the cost of uniforms, parents and guardians must also purchase regular clothes, making the concluding sum an unreasonable charge for clothing. Therefore this confirms that school uniforms are not necessary in education.
       With all district schools wearing uniforms, the diversity and individualism will be eliminated. In the matters of safety, gang members won’t be able to exhibit their colors and intruders will be evidently be perceptible among the students, however, there will be no uniqueness that separates kids from others. Without uniforms students can convey their natural inner feelings and also be able to show their talents. Nevertheless, uniforms hold students back to express themselves and hence are not needed in the school environment.
      With the Board of Education wanting students to come to school in uniforms will have its advantages and disadvantages. People often think with uniforms academic performances will increase, since there will be less distractions regarding the attention to other students clothing. In contrast, study shows that when comparing schools with a uniform policy to other schools, there was no dramatically improvement in neither academic scores nor student proficiency.
     It is in the best welfare of the students not to make uniforms obligatory for students in grade K-12. The Board of Education does not need a luxurious place that eradicates individuality and affects little on academic performances and the endorsement of safety. To disregard out towns future and present students would be a non productive attempt to make our schools a better place.

        Sincerely,
       Hadia Malik

Thursday, March 24, 2011

IT SPRING?

Hey everyone! I havent posted in a long long time! But i thought it would be nice to have a little" blog celebration" of SPRING!!
Obivously there is going to be a contest. Anyone with a blog in HJerbert Hoover can join( stinger, knights, rockets)

WAT YOU NEED_

A spring background
a post about spring
a tribute to spring  ( picture, slideshow, poem )
and lastly, you need to comment on this post so i know you are participating in this contest.


GOOD LUCK BLOGGERS!!!   GO DECOR!!!


READ WRITE AND BLOGG!!!

Boardroom essay

                                                                                                    Board Room Essay
                                                                                                 March, 25, 2011
     
          With the increasing speed of technological innovation, Smartphone’s have become a vital constituent in 42 percent of Americans daily routine. Smartphone’s give us more than just mobility and entertainment. As machinery becomes more intricate, so do our needs. Therefore, a Smartphone confirms to be an improved phone to purchase than any other cell phone. These provisions of internet/web, quality and efficiency are all combined into this gadget, small enough to carry it in your pocket.
             Smartphone’s offer greater functionality than, any other regular cell phones. It has the fastest wireless connection and the internet at your fingertips. This tool downloads, page loads and data transmission quickly than any ordinary phone. Wi-Fi is guaranteed to be the fastest and available in all areas. Therefore being an owner of a Smartphone will provide you the necessary speed you need for everyday life. With older phones the data would be slower and might not have Wi-Fi in all locations.
              These advanced phones have more than speed; the quality is ranked the number one in America. This phone features a vibrant touch screen and spacious keyboards. The call connection is great no matter where you are or when you call. It has excellent reception and superior sound quality. With the Smartphone’s quality, you can do everything effortlessly and professionally.
             These Smartphone’s efficacy reaches to a high-level. It uses less battery and is more durable than any other phone in the market. However the material of what phones are made of can be harmful. With the Smartphone’s no matter which product people choose to use, using post consumer recycled materials can help reduce waste. This makes Smartphone’s environment friendly. With this level of efficacy, no other phone can compete with this.
                 It is in the best interest that Smartphone’s are a better product to acquire than any other cell phone. Consumers of cell phones need the right assets that consist of quality, efficiency and speed. These features will benefit the consumers when it comes to purchase one. To fulfill the needs of customers and to sell products that are worth it is the true attempt in order to be successful.

             

Thursday, March 17, 2011

Reflecting on Persuasive Commercial Preformances

    Uusing persuasive in different ways, require alot of creavity. For our unit we decided to tape a persuasive commercial to make consumers buy the advertised product. This included humorous, laughing and absurd commercials. The advertisment me, Wamia and Alisa video taped was about how smart phones are better than regular phones. To add some feeling we named our company the REUNITED DUMPLING CORPORATION. Well Alisa did really. We combined two names and called our product the ismart! But theres always room for improvement. With three people with in our group we have a lengthened script. We should have made it in a reasonable length. We tried to use persuasive technique like: Even SELENA GOMEZ has one!!!!  The best part of the unit was video taping it and watching the bloopers. We kept improvising and our actors did a great job so we could hardly notice. We laughed and experienced acting. It wasnt the cast itself that did all the work. Our class mated Abi and Rebecca and all the others encourged us by letting themslevs make mistakes to take the pressure off. Also the teachers: Ms. Carrol AKA video taper, was a great assistance and who can forget Mrs Patalnao who made comments that really helped us know what to do in the future. I hope to continue doing many similar units like this one !


GET AN I SMART TODAY!!  ( just kidding)

Thursday, March 10, 2011

WHY SHOULD CHANNEL 7 ADVERTISE MY PRODUCT!!!

My product that I am advertising and selling is smart phones! To me they are the most usable and complex phone system in the century of modern day. In many ways they prove to be better than just regular phones, but the problem is: TO sell you got to ADVERTISE! In order for the world to know my opinion and to persuade to buy this product, I am composing this letter to the channel 7 station in order to convince them to add this commercial.

PURPOSE: TO PERSUADE TO ADVERTISE SMART PHONES

TO: NBC TV STATION
   Dear faculty and organization of NBC,
 I am sending this letter on behalf of the company that makes smart phones. As you have seen, as the world grows more composite so does technology. There isn’t any one that hasn’t heard of texting, email or chatting. Communication is now fast and is in such high quality those years before we would have never thought that technology would reach this high standard. However a big percentage of this machinery usage comes from the utilization of cell phones alone. Therefore our company wants to supply the world with the better and we believe that each of our smart phones will make a better cause.

 With the all new smart phones you can pick what you want on your phone and when you want it. Whether you want touch screen or lots of apps or if you want a flip and slide phone, we will always have the best brand and what suits you. Unlike other phone companies we don’t have contracts to sign or hidden fees. We like to do things straight off with our company and place ourselves in the consumer's shoes. We also have free delivery or counter purchase where you buy your desired product there and our team will set you up and hand over the phone with a smile. Contrast to other companies, we have a guarantee warrant until your plan expires! We are ready to fix replace clean any product you might think is not proper or is in some reason disabled.

Besides the basic things we include some thing every hting wants on their phone. Wherever yougo and when you go with smart phones we have internert and live webcam chat! At 6 in the morning you couldbe chatting with your friend in austrlia! With the feeofa dollar a month you could save hundreds by just switching over to our plan.

  These are all the reasons smart phones can be better of than any regular phone. By advertising our product notonly will you help us but you will also benefit your channel and your veiwers.So please reply back with a positive outlook on our product.

                              Sincerely,
                              Smart Phone Company



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