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Tuesday, December 21, 2010

Persuasive Article: Public VS Private

Public Schools Better than Private Schools


About nine out of ten children ranging from kindergarten to twelfth grade in America attend a public school. This is a large number of students that choose to go there, then the few who opt to go to a private school. However supporters from each school are debating what the differences between the schools are and which one would prove better for children. Each place however serves a noble purpose for education and learning but which one is more preferred and prominent.

According to a recent poll a hundred percent of students decided they would choose to go to a public school than rather go to a private school. Numerous schools seem to have more advantages than private schools which could show that sending children to a local school might show better results. It is been know that an average public school is twice as large as the average private schools. This will have a good affect for it allows a diverse group of students that offer the opportunity for young people to grow in understanding and acceptance of different races and cultures. This will enhance social and communicating skill of students. Another reason private school might not be the right choice because public schools offer programs, support and services to students with academic or health needs. Also there is more likely to be well equipped classes such as cooking or technology. This is another big benefit for attending a public school.

Education and studies must continue in the right place, which will enforce and prepare future students for challenges and expectations. The teachings of a public school will carry this role out and these benefits will accurately guide students to brighter futures,

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Hadia! I really liked your post. it is something patents and other people can relate to when they are chosing whether to put their children in a private school or a public school. Your paragraphs also had many important facts anf=d details. They are even the perfect size. Not too short. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!!!!

Abi Amazing! said...

Good Job Hadia!!I like how you supported proof for both private schools and public schools.I like you structure and your use of words.As anika said keep up the EXCELLENT work. I have no bad comments.

Abi Amazing! said...

Good Job Hadia!!I like how you supported proof for both private schools and public schools.I like you structure and your use of words.As anika said keep up the EXCELLENT work. I have no bad comments.

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